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Hi Maggie the woman who knows not how to stop!
Sometimes I think you make no sense.
Which makes me thing you are so dense!
Says he who continues to follow me
Should be in the kitchen making me tea... Hahahaha
Sometimes you just think you are so funny
But in reality you are so my sugar bunny.
But you are so push and cheeky too.
Oh alright then, just 'cos you're you. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wub.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':wub:' />
Nice finish Mooie! Thanks my dear mate
Are we having fun with this - or what? You bet! <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
Mary and Richard.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
Mary married Richard and became Mrs. Jones.
Oh no! They cried, too skinny, both bags of bones.
Richard asks Mary, "Any ideas to put on weight?"
But Mary cannot cook, Richard found out to late.
Richard was stressed and in a big mess
There was something he did not want to confess!
But alas he knew that she must know
He's a professional chef with his own TV show.
One must wonder how that could be
However as we all know Mary NEVER watches TV!
So the heck with her, it's about time she learnt
But does he really want his dinner burnt?
No way he shouted from the kitchen stove
I'll do it cos I want perfection by Jove!
A meal from the man that Mary loves best
Is filled with love and lemon zest
So Mary now knows without a lie
They will be together until they die.
Thanks for the last beer dear, now get another or else! <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/LMAO.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':LMAO:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/LMAO.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':LMAO:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/LMAO.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':LMAO:' /> I doan wanna die thirsty! Move! Pushy, pushy, pushy... Don't you think it's about time you got me one???? Hmmm!
Well sir, once again you have managed to complete one of our co-writes... I believe we work well together.
Anybody else out there who wishes to join, please feel free. As you can see we have a lot of fun with the poems. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
Thanks again Peter. You're a star.
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Hi there Maggie Moo Poet of all ages. (particularly OLD age). <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/LMAO.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':LMAO:' />
No way Jose!
It don't work that way.
Think old movies.
Think Tarzan movies.
OK so hear this:
Me Tarzan you Jane! <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wacky.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':wacky:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wacky.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':wacky:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wacky.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':wacky:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/pacman.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':pacman:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/pacman.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':pacman:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/pacman.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':pacman:' />
I better think of a new title! Um yes sir... Not happy with that one. Hee hee.
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Hi MaggieMoo chief poet and bottle washer on Melb Chat! Ha, ha... Aren't I lucky? Hahaha
Well!
Are your typing fingers getting itchy and ready for some more pain? Please... They are always itchy and ready for more torcher... <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/officechair.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':officechair:' />
Just for you:
Did you ever hear a long story about a woman named Maggie Loo?
A writer she was, and had a delicious heroine, a cow named Maggie Moo Oh thank you sir, you're ever so kind. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Chicken.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Chicken:' />
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly, that his beautiful wife was asking how long they were married?
Oh Peter, the second line is a tad long... Can you work on it before I add mine please? I'd do it, but I don't know what you want to take out.
OK Mooie, I'll get the beers JUST this time. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' /> Adesso! Contenta Tu? Oh I am happy... But that's just because you know how to make a friend happy.
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Hi Maggie!
Well it did not take long for me to screw up! Big sorry M'dear! <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/LMAO.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':LMAO:' /> Oh no dear... You are doing well. I just wasn't sure where you were taking this. I mean if a poem gets too boring for you, we could write a small narrative instead.... Oooh there's a thought????
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly
No matter, he would still love his woman
Proud as punch and perfectly.
Ok.... Not sure about this one... My vibe, just 'ain't a happenin'
What use is this Bee in the list of emotions? <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/115.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':bee:' /> Not sure, but would love to find out... Beeeeeeeeeeeeeee <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/115.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':bee:' />
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Hi Maggie.
Tell me about a narrative. How goes it then in the context of poetry? Well, it's more a prose than a narrative. It's like a small story written poetically but not in poetry form. I don't really know much about it... But our poems tend to lead that way, as though we are telling a story, ie...
She was awoken by the scent of his Lomani... His hands pressed gently on her face. Slowly he pulls her closer to his lips and kissed her, like their very first kiss. Even though it was their 21st anniversary he loved her adoringly and could never have gone through with it... His bags were packed and he had travelled far, but returned to her, for only her soft kisses could fill his void............ Oh golly look at me, I am babbling on. But you know what I mean, right?
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly
No matter, he would still love his woman
Proud as punch and perfectly.
Mary knew instinctively that he would always love her
But she was still apprehensive about his reaction
HIs eyes glided over her face
Reminising each line and countour
Hmmmm I hope you can regain some new vibrations, good good good vibrations keep a happening . . Hahaha. You keep singing to me luv, it will bring on some inspiration.
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Hi Poet King!
I though better of "Queen of Poets". Hahaha... Sort of an in-house joke. Heehee
Hey woman I asked about narratives not about War and Peace? Cheeky... I think you should wrtie me a narrative. Hee hee.
His bags were packed and he had traveled far, but returned to her, for only her soft kisses could fill his void............ Oh golly look at me, I am babbling on. But you know what I mean, right?
Babbling! Are you kidding? I never kid about my babbling. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
That Good Good Good Vibrations was in my best falsetto! I'll have you know! Really, um, er... Don't give up your day job... hahaha. No, no, just kidding I love your voice. Oh wait a minute I have never heard it. hahaha
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly
No matter, he would still love his woman
Proud as punch and perfectly.
Mary knew instinctively that he would always love her
But she was still apprehensive about his reaction
His eyes glided over her face
Reminiscing each line and contour
Even in this quiet sunny idle part of Central Park
He sensed her awakening to a new experience
What was going to be her next move?
Would she still love him after hearing his secret?
OK poet of the Gods, your turn! Ar, er, um... <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wub.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':wub:' /> Keep up the flattery.
And back at ya' sir. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
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Hello Sir Peter!
This poetry writing is a tough gig!
I think I'll stick to the war in the kitchen.
I got a chance there.
I gotta make scones one day.
Successfully that is, not just flat bits of hot burned dough.
Can you help, with pleasing instructions
Perhaps we could do it in your expansive kitchen. You are such a funny bloke... Expansive Kitchen. I don't think either of us can fit in their at one time without the odd elbow in the face... Hahaha. There's enough room for me and another little half size me. Other than that you can be my supervisor. Hee hee. (Plus between you and I, I can't make scones all that well. Shhh!, Don't tell anybody. Hee hee)
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly
No matter, he would still love his woman
Proud as punch and perfectly.
Mary knew instinctively that he would always love her
But she was still apprehensive about his reaction
His eyes glided over her face
Reminiscing each line and contour
Even in this quiet sunny idle part of Central Park
He sensed her awakening to a new experience
What was going to be her next move?
Would she still love him after hearing his secret?
Richard was not sure if it was the right moment
Or even if he could muster the courage
But he placed his hands on her shoulders
and let slip his news of enlistment.
All yours my friend... <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
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Hi Mooie!
Well being a poet is not much fun
Really I'd rather eat a hotcross bun!
Being a poet you get paid zip
Better spend the time at the Gym and enjoy a dip!
Oh my gosh... I have created a poet monster. Hahaha
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly
No matter, he would still love his woman
Proud as punch and perfectly.
Mary knew instinctively that he would always love her
But she was still apprehensive about his reaction
His eyes glided over her face
Reminiscing each line and contour
Even in this quiet sunny idle part of Central Park
He sensed her awakening to a new experience
What was going to be her next move?
Would she still love him after hearing his secret?
Richard was not sure if it was the right moment
Or even if he could muster the courage
But he placed his hands on her shoulders
and let slip his news of enlistment.
Hearing this sent a chill thru her body
To which the baby responed with a gentle movement
Alas the moment to break the news slipped away
The future was now different and so distant.
A lone teardrop on Mary's cheek
Left Richard gazing longingly into her eyes
Would she wait for him?
Should he just let go of the secret?
Um Peter, how long is this poem going to be???
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Hi Maggie.
Mary's Lament.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
How long was it now? Mary was reminiscing out loud
Richard heard and guessed correctly
No matter, he would still love his woman
Proud as punch and perfectly.
Mary knew instinctively that he would always love her
But she was still apprehensive about his reaction
His eyes glided over her face
Reminiscing each line and contour
Even in this quiet sunny idle part of Central Park
He sensed her awakening to a new experience
What was going to be her next move?
Would she still love him after hearing his secret?
Richard was not sure if it was the right moment
Or even if he could muster the courage
But he placed his hands on her shoulders
and let slip his news of enlistment.
Hearing this sent a chill thru her body
To which the baby responed with a gentle movement
Alas the moment to break the news slipped away
The future was now different and so distant.
Mooie this is where I thought it should end. But I don't know the protocol on these matters. Sorry Cara. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/im Not Worthy.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':notworthy:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/im Not Worthy.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':notworthy:' /> NO, no, if you would like it to end here, then that's ok. Remember it is a co-write and we both need to compromise. I will be happy with your decision. Lets leave it here. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
Kinda like: "To be continued". <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cry.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cry:' /> Sweetie you are right, if it was up to me. I would be going on forever. Hahaha. Lucky you stop me sometimes.
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Hi Maggie Moo.
Idle Waiting Days.
Richard had been away only a week
When he suddenly returned unannounced
There standing before him, was his worse nightmare
Mary in the arms of another.
Oooh, have a feeling this one is going to be fun... Hee hee.
Ciao
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Hi Maggie Moo.
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
Idle Waiting Days.
Richard had been away only a week
When he suddenly returned unannounced
There standing before him, was his worse nightmare
Mary in the arms of another.
Quickly, silently he shut the door and stood outside once more.
Surely he was mistaken?
Had Mary seen him?
He searched his mind for clues he may have missed
Was this man from her past or perhaps he mistook the embrace
The question is what will he do now?
The other man walked away from Mary
He caught Richards eye and let out a roar of laughter.
Richard now, betrayed and riduled turned to walk away
Mary called out to him... "Wait my love!"
Go babe and surprise me! <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Rose.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Rose:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Rose.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Rose:' /> Oh I really love this one... It's very exciting don't you think? And anyway it's time again. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' /> Cheers Ma'am! Yes please my friend. You always know when I need a drink. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
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By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
Idle Waiting Days.
Richard had been away only a week
When he suddenly returned unannounced
There standing before him, was his worse nightmare
Mary in the arms of another.
Quickly, silently he shut the door and stood outside once more.
Surely he was mistaken?
Had Mary seen him?
He searched his mind for clues he may have missed
Was this man from her past or perhaps he mistook the embrace
The question is what will he do now?
The other man walked away from Mary
He caught Richards eye and let out a roar of laughter.
Richard now, betrayed and ridiculed turned to walk away
Mary called out to him... "Wait my love!"
Richard stopped.
Humiliated and hurt or not he had to know why Mary had betrayed him.
His heart was aching as he waited for her
"He's my long lost brother" she claims knowingly
Richard was relieved and yet nervous as well,
Why did he laugh at him?
Maggie I hope it is going where you would like. I'm loving it. It's going great isn't it. If there is anything you want to change, you can. I won't mind. Promise.
Coffee this time as you had too much beer just before. Yours <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cuppa.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cuppa:' /> and mine <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cuppa.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cuppa:' /> Oh thanks I do have rather a sore head.
Little things I should have said and done, . . . but I never had the time . . .
You were always on my mind. You were always on my mind . . . Remember that song? Ah, good old Willie. I loved that song
Best Wishes.
Peter J.
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Hi sir,
Hi Mooie Resident Poet at Melbourne Chat.
You know it's an important position! Yes? Don't blow it Sister! Oh I truly am honoured. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
By MaggieMoo and PeterJ.
Idle Waiting Days.
Richard had been away only a week
When he suddenly returned unannounced
There standing before him, was his worse nightmare
Mary in the arms of another.
Quickly, silently he shut the door and stood outside once more.
Surely he was mistaken?
Had Mary seen him?
He searched his mind for clues he may have missed
Was this man from her past or perhaps he mistook the embrace
The question is what will he do now?
The other man walked away from Mary
He caught Richards eye and let out a roar of laughter.
Richard now, betrayed and ridiculed turned to walk away
Mary called out to him... "Wait my love!"
Richard stopped.
Humiliated and hurt or not he had to know why Mary had betrayed him.
His heart was aching as he waited for her
"He's my long lost brother" she claims knowingly
Richard was relieved and yet nervous as well,
Why did he laugh at him?
Richard worried needlessly, he had been seen by Mary
And who perhaps unwisely played out the charade
Now even her humour amazed him
Smiling at her in awe, he knew that now was time
So down on one knee he went...
What about:
All over St Louie and down the Frisco Bay
The're wearing their baggies and Archie sandals too.
Is it Sweet Little Sixteen by Chuck Berry
Time for relax and coffee M'dear.
<img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cuppa.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cuppa:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cuppa.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cuppa:' /> One each.
Anyone else?
Oh yes sir... We need it. We've worked very hard. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
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Oh no Peter, you have hit the nail right on the head.
Thanks for changing it. Wonderful ending.
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Hi Pierre!
Glad to help a bit!
I like it anyway!
Over to you, whenever you are ready.
Have a beer after your work. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' />
I cannot afford any more champagne! I can I am rich... Oh wait, I mean rich in love... Hee hee Here take some warmth <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Hug.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Hug:' />
Ok Peter, what shall we do with Mary and Richard? Shall we toss a bit of drama in their lives?
The Quiet Storm.
Mary sit's quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
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Hi Maggie.
The Quiet Storm.
Mary sit's quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping oncontollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Have a good sleep Mooie!
Thanks sir, you too. Night.
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Hello Ms. Moo!
Try this for size. Golly you certainly are a genious.
The Quiet Storm.
By MaggieMoo and Peter J.
Mary sits quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping uncontrollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Suddenly she remembered the doctor admonishing her "Be careful, relaxation is important."
How would they move forward if her pregnancy failed again.
Now her worry; to strees, her stress; to nerves
Anxiety set in and her body started to tremble
What should she do? Who shall she call?
Ok buddy... This is tense. Your turn.
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Hi Mooie.
Tense tense tensed up I am with nowhere to turn! Help!
Try this for size. Golly you certainly are a genius.
Pray tell just what are you referring to? Your writing is perfect. Are you sure you aren't secretly a poet????
The Quiet Storm.
By MaggieMoo and Peter J.
Mary sits quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping uncontrollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Suddenly she remembered the doctor admonishing her "Be careful, relaxation is important."
How would they move forward if her pregnancy failed again.
Now her worry; to stress, her stress; to nerves
Anxiety set in and her body started to tremble
What should she do? Who shall she call?
Richard would be asleep in Ohio
What about her brother! Only two suburbs away!
During the call she felt the unmistakable stirring of the pending baby
The drive to the hospital was longer the usual
The rain pounded, the storm raged.
Drunk, her brother drove, faster and faster....
I think I'm more stressed than Mary!
Is there a pot of gold at the end of this one? I don't know, this one is scaring even me... Brrrr.
OK then we should just share a beer M'dear. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' /> Better? Good idea... Yummy... Ahhhh!
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Hi Peter.
This is a tough gig and I'm taking on board water! My boat is about to sink! Not yet darl... <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
Pray tell just what are you referring to? Your writing is perfect. Are you sure you aren't secretly a poet????
Carissima, I'm just riding this wild wave and hanging on to the back end of YOUR charging surf board. No you need to be <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/im Not Worthy.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':notworthy:' />
The Quiet Storm.
By MaggieMoo and Peter J.
Mary sits quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping uncontrollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Suddenly she remembered the doctor admonishing her "Be careful, relaxation is important."
How would they move forward if her pregnancy failed again.
Now her worry; to stress, her stress; to nerves
Anxiety set in and her body started to tremble
What should she do? Who shall she call?
Richard would be asleep in Ohio
What about her brother! Only two suburbs away!
During the call she felt the unmistakable stirring of the pending baby
The drive to the hospital was longer the usual
The rain pounded, the storm raged.
Drunk, her brother drove, faster and faster....
Then the unmistakable wail of sirens pierced the cabin
Police sirens
Thank God Mary thought, my idiot brother will slow down
Suddenly the door bursts open and low and behold it was Richard
He was back from the frontline
She was relieved and excited at the same time
OK Maggie I need a coffee bad! Yes sir, not wrong there... I am typing with tense shoulders. Very sore. Hee hee
Here's yours <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cuppa.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cuppa:' /> and mine <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Cuppa.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Cuppa:' /> Thanks darl... Ahhhhh.
Anche per Te <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Rose.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Rose:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Rose.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Rose:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Rose.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Rose:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Rose.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Rose:' /> <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/Love.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':Love:' />
"He who has not experienced, need not judge" One of my own.
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Peter... I think you've done it. You've completed yet another fine piece of work. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=' ' />
Good work!
The Quiet Storm.
By MaggieMoo and Peter J.
Mary sits quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping uncontrollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Suddenly she remembered the doctor admonishing her "Be careful, relaxation is important."
How would they move forward if her pregnancy failed again.
Now her worry; to stress, her stress; to nerves
Anxiety set in and her body started to tremble
What should she do? Who shall she call?
Richard would be asleep in Ohio
What about her brother! Only two suburbs away!
During the call she felt the unmistakable stirring of the pending baby
The drive to the hospital was longer the usual
The rain pounded, the storm raged.
Drunk, her brother drove, faster and faster....
Then the unmistakable wail of sirens pierced the cabin
Police sirens
Thank God Mary thought, my idiot brother will slow down
Suddenly the door bursts open and low and behold it was Richard
He was back from the front line
She was relieved and excited at the same time
Within the hour Mary and Richard's faces shone
As they studied their newborn son!
Ma! Cosa n'Pensa Cara? <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wub.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':wub:' />
<img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' />
Ab fab darl, ab fab... Yahoooo.
"He who has not experienced, need not judge" One of my own.
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