I Need Some Constructive Feedback For My Website! Help!

[speakmyloversname]

Hi,





I'm a 19 year old motivational speaker and I've just completed my website.

I know I'm young please don't judge me based on my age.

Let the merit of my work speak for itself.



http://cyberelevation.com



Can you please let me know what you think of it?

That would be of great assitance to me.



Also lol if you like you can watch my first speech for free!

Please do! Let me know what you think of it and offer me any tips or suggestions!

Though if it's excellent please say so! Encouragement is really helpful!!!



You can view the video directly on youtube. I started the website yesterday. And viewing it on youtube will save me some money, web bandwith expenses, which would be nice particularly in the first few weeks of business:



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=580Z_iZ7slw



Well anyway, let me know what you think.



And I hope that this summer is a sweet one <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='' />.



Warm Regards,



speakmyloversname

[the yank]

[quote name='speakmyloversname' timestamp='1288980007' post='30840']

Hi,





I'm a 19 year old motivational speaker and I've just completed my website.

I know I'm young please don't judge me based on my age.

Let the merit of my work speak for itself.



http://cyberelevation.com



Can you please let me know what you think of it?

That would be of great assitance to me.



Also lol if you like you can watch my first speech for free!

Please do! Let me know what you think of it and offer me any tips or suggestions!

Though if it's excellent please say so! Encouragement is really helpful!!!



You can view the video directly on youtube. I started the website yesterday. And viewing it on youtube will save me some money, web bandwith expenses, which would be nice particularly in the first few weeks of business:



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=580Z_iZ7slw



Well anyway, let me know what you think.



And I hope that this summer is a sweet one <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='' />.



Warm Regards,



speakmyloversname

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I'm not really sure where to post behind the quote or not... and if this will get back to you. You have very nice layout and your philosophy certainly won't hurt anyone. You are young and many of the newest generation becoming of wisdom, of which you have a long way to go before you have inner peace to walk through the world without fear. But you are getting there. Just be sure as not to preach instead, make an example not being a male hypocrite and living in luxury while people die around you because you want to be wealthy.. I.e. I have nothing material aside from minor essentials but I do communicate with the world.. That is essential. I must pass my wisdom on. You in your youth have a life to live that will twist like the rivers, if you learn wisdom of silence for a time and just listen from afar.... you will gain wisdom 10 fold at a young age. The elders of Australia of mother earth, don't own the land.



But I see no relevance to you posting one website among the millions of web sites with a video. Again it is of fine quality and composition as I too am a designer.



Jeff