17-06-2011, 09:36 AM
Yea... Here we go...
Another year had past
As the bell chimes
Out came the clowns
and out came the mimes
Got it Peter... The word at the end of every second row, should rhyme... Listen to the rythym of the poem as well. Reading it out loud, it usually helps to keep the flow. Just do four lines and then it's my turn... Keep the theme going and good luck. Writing a combined rhyming poem is very difficult. But we can do it. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='
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Ciao for now.
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Another year had past
As the bell chimes
Out came the clowns
and out came the mimes
Got it Peter... The word at the end of every second row, should rhyme... Listen to the rythym of the poem as well. Reading it out loud, it usually helps to keep the flow. Just do four lines and then it's my turn... Keep the theme going and good luck. Writing a combined rhyming poem is very difficult. But we can do it. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='
' /> Ciao for now.
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"He who has not experienced, need not judge" One of my own.