Hi Mooie.
Tense tense tensed up I am with nowhere to turn! Help!
Try this for size. Golly you certainly are a genius.
Pray tell just what are you referring to? Your writing is perfect. Are you sure you aren't secretly a poet????
The Quiet Storm.
By MaggieMoo and Peter J.
Mary sits quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping uncontrollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Suddenly she remembered the doctor admonishing her "Be careful, relaxation is important."
How would they move forward if her pregnancy failed again.
Now her worry; to stress, her stress; to nerves
Anxiety set in and her body started to tremble
What should she do? Who shall she call?
Richard would be asleep in Ohio
What about her brother! Only two suburbs away!
During the call she felt the unmistakable stirring of the pending baby
The drive to the hospital was longer the usual
The rain pounded, the storm raged.
Drunk, her brother drove, faster and faster....
I think I'm more stressed than Mary!
Is there a pot of gold at the end of this one? I don't know, this one is scaring even me... Brrrr.
OK then we should just share a beer M'dear. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' /> Better? Good idea... Yummy... Ahhhh!
Tense tense tensed up I am with nowhere to turn! Help!
Try this for size. Golly you certainly are a genius.
Pray tell just what are you referring to? Your writing is perfect. Are you sure you aren't secretly a poet????
The Quiet Storm.
By MaggieMoo and Peter J.
Mary sits quietly and in despair
Richard missing for days has left her uneasy
And unsure of their future
Her heart told her he must accept the temporary interstate job
Instead of the steady less one nearby.
The thought of birthing without Richard
Left Mary weeping uncontrollably.
She wondered what he was currently doing
Was he thinking of her and their unborn miracle?
Suddenly she remembered the doctor admonishing her "Be careful, relaxation is important."
How would they move forward if her pregnancy failed again.
Now her worry; to stress, her stress; to nerves
Anxiety set in and her body started to tremble
What should she do? Who shall she call?
Richard would be asleep in Ohio
What about her brother! Only two suburbs away!
During the call she felt the unmistakable stirring of the pending baby
The drive to the hospital was longer the usual
The rain pounded, the storm raged.
Drunk, her brother drove, faster and faster....
I think I'm more stressed than Mary!
Is there a pot of gold at the end of this one? I don't know, this one is scaring even me... Brrrr.
OK then we should just share a beer M'dear. <img src='http://www.melbournechat.org/public/style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/piwo.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':beer:' /> Better? Good idea... Yummy... Ahhhh!
"He who has not experienced, need not judge" One of my own. 